best story EVER!

Throughout the paragraph Kingston showed us different ways to increase our writing skills. She showed many ways to describe things in great detail and make you feel as if you're there. An example of her ability to describe is, "On the other woman, strangers, I can recognize a curled lip, a sidelong glane, pinched shoulders." Kingston also uses a good use of quotes from the past. "I sailed alone," she says, "to the capital of the entire province." She took a brown leather suticase and a seabag stuffed with two quilts. In that quote she emphasizes with both descriptions and relating to that past. This author has shown us a good example of what should be in our essays.